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javacisnotrecognized
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 Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:49 am Post subject: Debussy Reverie |
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http://www.veoh.com/videos/v17828899Frsq2Pk5
Anyway, I could say a thing or two about this performance, but I'll save it for after everyone is done picking it apart  |
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alan fraser
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| Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 11:08 pm Post subject: serbia censor |
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Hey, i am in serbia where veoh is not available. Any other way of watching this?
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alan fraser
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| Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 12:26 am Post subject: debussy reverie |
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OK I finally watched it (I'm in Miami). The pianist (is it you?) has really nice tone, and a really good sense of how to get the best, most healthy sound out of the instrument, which sounds like a pretty good Steinway am I right? His hands are nice: relaxed but not flaccid. Relaxed in a way that lets "bone power" manifest in a nice way.
My criticisms are more musical - he seems so intent on tone production that the phrase suffers at times, and also a sense of orchestration. Physically, if you use your arm that much on each melody tone, you are bound to get "bung, bung, bung" instead of singing... Individually beautiful tones do not necessarily a great performance make!
Anyway it is a really good start, don't abandon your dedication to really beautiful piano sound, just continue to refine...
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javacisnotrecognized
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| Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 4:19 pm Post subject: Comments and salutations |
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Wow, you're a great guy for watching this video even so long after I originally tried to get it to work, thank you!
Anyway, about the playing itself, your comments are basically what I thought the biggest problem was. It seems I developed a habit of moving my arm on every single note from years of playing with very lazy fingers. Thus phrasing suffers.
I also thought, that maybe the forte section with the main theme in octaves sounded a bit forced, and the one right after that (With the melody in the left hand) could've used a bit more differentiation. You also can't hear it that well in the video, but there seemed to be a bit overpedalling.
There's also some flubs here and there, but those will probably dissapear when I finish memorizing the thing. Thanks again for your comments. |
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alan fraser
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| Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 1:21 am Post subject: musical line |
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Yeah, but when you memorize don' forget to take the 'stodginess' out. Ask yourself more rigorously what's the emotional tone, and how can I express that more by making the melody more sinuous?
All the best,
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javacisnotrecognized
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| Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 9:13 pm Post subject: Progress? |
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I've just re-recorded this piece after a year; I think it's improved a lot.
Apologies for the terrible quality; the video camera isnt' compatible with my new laptop so the webcam was used instead:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NYj2q864qZE |
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alan fraser
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I like this very much! A pity about the sound quality, which is REALLY bad! But everything you're doing seems right to me. THere's a real musician there, listening well to what's happening and using his hands well to express the musical thought. And your hand also seem to understand the specifics of piano tone, you are getting really free vibrations and good orchestrations, nice phrase lines.
A pleasure to watch despite the lousy microphone. Please play it again and put it online when you've resolved the compatibility issues between your handycam and the new laptop!
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